The basic idea has possibilities, but you need to go back, and flesh it out with greter detail. More detail gives more hooks from which to hang future plot ideas and keep them all in a thread.
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Populos stultus viris indignas honores saepe dat. -Horace
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Fortuna est caeca. -Cicero
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"You know the night before was a tough one when even the sound of the fizz hurts your head." -Mike Hammer.
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