November 22nd, 2004, 01:59 PM
|
#36
|
Colonial Story Teller
| Fleet Moderator | | Colonial Fleets |
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: New Orleans (Metairie), LA
Posts: 4,785
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by julix
Here is my first poem not about grief and pain....
I will never forget
the way your eyes
cut through me
right down to
my very soul
a moment so filled
with a kind of
mesmorizing gaze
I have never experienced
before or since
piercing me like
the point of a knife
cutting through
the self-protecting
illusional armour
flesh then bone
leaving a lasting mark
never to fade
always having
a place deep
within me
|
Very nice, Julix.
Martok2112
__________________
Don't be a fan. Don't be a victim!-Martok2112
|
|
|