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Old November 22nd, 2004, 01:59 PM   #36
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Originally Posted by julix
Here is my first poem not about grief and pain....




I will never forget
the way your eyes
cut through me
right down to
my very soul
a moment so filled
with a kind of
mesmorizing gaze
I have never experienced
before or since
piercing me like
the point of a knife
cutting through
the self-protecting
illusional armour
flesh then bone
leaving a lasting mark
never to fade
always having
a place deep
within me

Very nice, Julix.

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