Thanks BSG.....it is always good to see you!

The whole is splintered
into shattered pieces
of a broken heart
which will not mend
never to come together
unfulfilled
scarred
torn
Impossible to heal
magnets of time
can't pull the pieces
whole again
no amount
no measure
no pleasure
only pieces
left undone

keep it coming!

Water memories
clear, stable water
life giving water
to be around it is to remember
a clear blue body
a mountain setting
so many times happy
flashes in the mind's eye
and in my soul
drawn back through time
pieces, fragments of time
some so filled with complete
joy
Untill
a break in time
a loss so complete
starring at the calm waters
I see the darkness
that is below the surface

ooooooooo,
the picture sent for this threadlooks good yes?

Very deep Julix, very profound. That one about heartbreak and loss is the one I most felt touched by, but I still have more to read.

Pain
so intense my heart
is pounding
I feel dizzy
disconnected
lost and alone
the pain
mutiplies it seems
no escape
I can't think
my heart pounds so
I want to run
but know there is
no where I can go
that the pain won't find me
again
and again

I know of which you speak.

Then you may need a hug...................(((((((((((((((((rep)))))))))))))))))) I will give ya one anyway!

Thank you Julix,

We tend to write of that we know,
so just for you ...................(((((((((((((((((Julix))))))))))))))))))

from me.

Awwwwwwwwwww,
Thanks, you don't know how much I needed that actually...........

Watching
in a world
that doesn't fit
like a million
puzzle pieces
undone
scattered
continually turning
pieces
round and back
inside and out
still no chance
no way to feel
the wholeness

A spirit shattered
a breaking point
splintered
mirrored segments
of a whole
that is
never in harmony
disjointed
and broken
a vital piece
gone forever

I feel sharp edges...

Those were very good Jonie, and very dark. From the depths of you to the heart of me, they moved me. :)

Indeed..there are, but if you met me you wouldn't see it or feel it. Just me, it is all inside.


Thanks for the feedback :)

Then I am glad my friend(((((ron))))))) On any given day that is the most I could hope for :)

What you hope for is the least that happens, because what fully happens is far more than I described. :)

This is wonderful and deep my friend! A joy(your friendship) to be bound toghter by our deepest pain......................

Darkness surrounds
an innocence lost
a knife with no blade
stabbing, cutting
words and deeds
twist together
until
there is nothing left
the life remains
but the essence
long since
crushed and suffocated
like a delicate
flower
left too long on a shelf
with no nutrients
no warmth
only the cold
harshness
of reality