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thank you Shiningstar :rose:
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Just beautiful :rose: |
Thank you so much Sis...
I know you know, we have that in common. Thanks for your kind words :heart: |
Hi Julix! I can /so/ identify with your words. Again, you have touched a chord in me. Great work ;)
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Thank you so much your words mean so much to me! You are the master...I am but the learner ;) I do think that my dear muffit...i am so happy right now....thank you :rose: :rose: :heart: :rose: |
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I try every door every window and still no exit no way to feel whole or complete only a little girl hiding and sitting alone the tears flow like a river that makes an ocean water all around drowning in tears of pain no comfort or warmth no one to save me struggling in a sea of grief as I go under yet again wanting to be safe but lost in a vast watery void with no life, no sign no rescue 2) Too many times I walk away afraid to dream a life without expression a way of traveling through time totally numb the spirit longs to be free to go anywhere but is held down by some unseen enemy a long-time fear never to subside a way to break through unknown to me |
Julix, check into some of these links:
http://www.aar-online.org/ http://www.sfwa.org/writing/agents.htm http://www.sfwa.org/writing/OP71.htm http://www.authorlink.com/605001in.html http://www.publishersweekly.com/inde...blishersweekly http://www.randomhouse.com/index.pperl http://salon.com/books/feature/2002/...ush/index.html http://www.sfwa.org/bulletin/articles/stalled.htm http://www.sfwa.org/contracts/contracts.htm http://www.speculations.com/rumormill/ http://www.sfwa.org/Beware/Safesearch.html http://www.copyright.gov/ http://www.sfwa.org/beware/copyright.html http://www.writersdigest.com/store/books.asp Some of these may have some good info and insight for you to put to use. :) |
Oh, that last one was about me all right. Your wording hits home my friend. Strong expressions of wording they are.
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Searching through time
for a clue that makes sense some puzzle piece that allows my spirit to comprehend the darkness around it swiriling and pulling in all directions ending up nowhere except back to the same spot flashes of light in patterns that are undone time and life a mystery that is unwilling to yield |
Way coolish Julix!! :thumbsup:
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Thank you Muffit(my computer won't let me do the smiles right now)Heart and rose and smile.......lol |
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Here is my first poem not about grief and pain....
I will never forget the way your eyes cut through me right down to my very soul a moment so filled with a kind of mesmorizing gaze I have never experienced before or since piercing me like the point of a knife cutting through the self-protecting illusional armour flesh then bone leaving a lasting mark never to fade always having a place deep within me |
Thanks Bsg :)
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Very nice, Julix. :) :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :rose: Martok2112 |
Beautiful Julix! Keep writing :thumbsup:
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Thanks Martok and Shingingstar....I am glad you liked it :heart: :heart: :heart:
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I really enjoy your poems sis......hope you keep writing.
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Keep it up, Julix! :)
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