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BST
January 20th, 2006, 08:58 PM
Please use this thread to discuss the story, "Matter of Honor".
BST
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BST
January 21st, 2006, 08:10 PM
Well, I just had the pleasure of reading this story.
I could envision this as a two-part ep.
Nice job, Eric!
:thumbsup:
Eric Paddon
January 21st, 2006, 08:55 PM
Thank you very much, Pete! :salute: in return.
If you see this as a two-part episode though, that does make me wonder how many parts you're going to be viewing Episode #4 by our own Senmut. :)
BST
January 21st, 2006, 09:09 PM
:eek:
Umm, I think I hear the coffee pot a-beckoning!
:D
Seriously, there were too many action scenes to fit this into a 1-hour block. I might have to go back to review it but, I think a break point might have been possible during the first council meeting. Kudos to the treatment for Adama....Antipas had Adama right where Adama wanted him.
;)
Eric Paddon
January 21st, 2006, 09:25 PM
Thanks! Sire Antipas is probably the one character I've created I felt that was most essential to address the complaint that Galactica too often had the Council members as buffoon type villains. Trying to come up with a formidable, serious adversary with youthful charisma was what I was looking for there. I keep thinking of Timothy Dalton in "The Lion In Winter" as the image of what Antipas would be.
Raptor
April 15th, 2006, 06:16 AM
Nicely written, and well paced. I really felt for Apollo when his quiet, romantic evening with Sheba was spoilled. At least they got back together for the end! :salute: :thumbsup:
Now we just have to watch out for that Councilor...
I'm definitely going to continued reading these!
Eric Paddon
April 15th, 2006, 02:57 PM
Thanks, Raptor! Glad you enjoyed it. :salute:
captmiloman
June 27th, 2006, 11:06 AM
I don't know about a two parter, but the story would've made for a really strong hour long episode.
Eric Paddon
June 27th, 2006, 02:04 PM
Thanks! Yes, I envisioned it more as a low-key one hour type episode. It's not until we get to VS #4 ("Relics") that the budget-busting two-parters begin. :)
Daidalos
August 4th, 2008, 10:23 PM
I am glad I got to read "Matter of Honor" I must say it was pretty good.
Infact I can't wait to read the next one! Thanks for creating them and for sharing them with us all.
Athene
August 5th, 2008, 10:04 AM
EXCELLENT! :thumbsup: :salute:
Eric Paddon
August 5th, 2008, 04:58 PM
Much appreciated! I'll be making sure that more stories that have been finished get posted here soon.
BST
August 5th, 2008, 07:29 PM
Much appreciated! I'll be making sure that more stories that have been finished get posted here soon.
Um, yeah, just knock on the doorbell or ring the door when you're ready!
:eek:
Oh my, I'm so confoozed. :D
Eric Paddon
August 5th, 2008, 08:54 PM
LOL, Episodes 9-12 are on their way to you!
Punisher454
March 28th, 2009, 09:18 PM
I just read this, and i agree with Eric's comment that its a low key 1 part episode. but its very good,and i can find no flaws it.
this would very easily work as a filmed episode as is.
marvin
Eric Paddon
April 25th, 2009, 09:58 PM
Many thanks Punisher!
Senmut
December 23rd, 2009, 12:00 AM
We write better than 90% of TV folks do!
Vulpa II
May 19th, 2010, 01:02 PM
I can't open any of the PDF files for these first few episodes. :(
BST
May 19th, 2010, 05:24 PM
Vulpa II,
Sorry for the inconvenience. It appears that this is "fallout" from a server problem that we encountered, last week. I'll need to reload these files.
Thanks for letting us know.
:salute:
corairs
May 20th, 2010, 04:12 PM
We we'll be whating . :salute:
Vulpa II
May 20th, 2010, 04:17 PM
And we'll be waiting too! :rotf:
corairs
May 20th, 2010, 05:59 PM
And we'll be waiting too! :rotf:Yep that two . :duck::rotf::D
Senmut
October 5th, 2012, 09:34 PM
I just read this, and i agree with Eric's comment that its a low key 1 part episode. but its very good,and i can find no flaws it.
this would very easily work as a filmed episode as is.
marvin
Like most of what EP writes...this is ure the superior of anything one might have seen....elsewhere. (ahem..cough...cough....)
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