Looking it over, not bad.
Galactica as raiding for food? Becoming not much better than Cylons? Well don't know about that. The fact that the pilots are carrying swords is also interesting. Always hated the fact that the cool looking bad-guys knights (the Cylons) had swords, but not the good guys.
Though don't get me wrong, blasters are cool as long as you have ammo, but a sword has unlimited swings.