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Old August 10th, 2004, 03:07 AM   #1
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Question The Human Cell



How apt it is we name our parts as cells. For in truth we find ourselves within one when without the courtesy of asking birth leaves us here. And though in desperate intimacy we strive to circumvent the walls like concertina briars that keep our hearts from freedom, we find in darkest evening hours the shroud that hides us hugging loneliness inside.



These shells that wrap our souls hide needs as well, like hermit crabs that shield their deepest wants from being held. The softest tissues forge our prison bars, and tears the tin cup cries we hide inside. Need like a warden drives us nourish well our private bastilles, as though to lose internment were a crime.



And if in happy neglect we find love anyway, another inmate’s glad to ridicule our momentary lack of melancholy, and make the fleeting hope set sail away. A spouse, a child, a toy, a show, mere camplight codon shadows dispelled by day.


If day’s sole longing effort is to illume the prison yard, then give me night’s false shroud and let me dream. A rainbow is not light that meets the eye; but Nature’s blush without the powdered shell.



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Old August 10th, 2004, 06:40 AM   #2
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Very good Muffit....you always have great words!
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very moving Muffit!

My favorite musing yet.......
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Old August 10th, 2004, 12:06 PM   #4
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Thank you so much Julix and Amberstar It is so wonderful to have friends like you...

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Old August 11th, 2004, 05:37 PM   #6
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Muffit, beautiful prose as always, my dear friend. It is truly a blessing to know someone with as beautiful a heart and mind as yours.

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Can a brotha git a minit?

Muffit, beautiful prose as always, my dear friend. It is truly a blessing to know someone with as beautiful a heart and mind as yours.

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Old August 11th, 2004, 07:43 PM   #8
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Thanks so much Martok! And equally to know someone like you who is so talented at writing stories!

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LOL! So much love in the house of Muffit.

Thank you, Julix. And Muffit.

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Such a way with thoughts and words you have, Muffit. You always bring up new ways of viewing life. So fascinating your musings are.
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Muffit, you are incredible at this. Did you try publishing the words that you write???
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you tug at heartstrings!
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Thank you so much Archangel and Bsg Nope, never tried publishing or anything, just sharing with my wonderful friends...

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