Re: Comment Thread for "The Return" by Gin Rummy
This could be perfect fodder for a TV film.
My only critique is that, after 10 yahrens and more, the new city should be further along. I mean there should be more buildings not made from cut-up ship's hulls. Brick kilns and steel mills.
Just a thought.
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