Sorry, I'm catching up on a lot of things. Read your unfinished story, and I hope you find time to finish it. As I was reading, a whole flood of images and memories swept over me; felt like I was back in 1979 "watching" a new BG episode. I like how you introduce characters that I (we) want to know more about…. One "typo," in the landing bay scene, in which Apollo addresses President Tigh as "Colonel"….. Easy fix, though.
