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Originally Posted by julix
Here is another poem...I am not real happy with this one...but any feedback is appreciated 
A long journey
It seems
Hard and vast
Treacherous
So many obstacles
Which only taunt me
As I feel
I will never find
The end, my goal
So far away
Unattainable
It seems
As I continue to climb
I feel doubt and fear
Confusion
Can I make it?
I stumble and fall
Yet again like
so many times before
do I dare get up again?
And if I do where
Do I turn?
The path is not clear
There is no map
No compass
No help
I am alone in my quest |
i think those words are v v well written, i too have writen a whole book of poems for my loved ones back home while im away in the desert
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