Thank you again, Kester. I am glad the story is still holding your attention, and you are enjoying it.
Your descriptions are indeed much more vivid, and I assuredly appreciate them. I'm still pretty new to the whole fanfic thing, and sometimes I do get into a rush, especially if my mind is going a million miles a minute with ideas.
Perhaps we should consider co-writing a story.
Also, the story still is far from finished. Perhaps we can talk ideas where the story is by the time you reach its current stopping place, which can easily be mistaken for a climax. Obviously, you would get a co-writing credit.