Wow, I'm surprised to see this thread back again. I erased the file a few weeks ago, thinking it was old news, but I'll put it back up again for a while if anyone wants to look at it. I'm glad some people like it. It makes me feel like it wasn't a total waste of time anyway.
I got brain freeze around page 100, but if anyone wants to take it from there, we can split the money when DeSanto films it.
http://www.geocities.com/rgame3/bgscript.html
