Abduction - A True Story Discussion Thread

[BST]

Please post your thoughts, regarding Abduction - A True Story, in this thread.

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[BST]

Muffit,

You REALLY had me going on this one. I was thinking something else, entirely. Good story!

:thumbsup:

[Dawg]

Wonderful ending. Had me guessing the whole time.

Excellent read, as usual, Muffit!

:rose:

I am
Dawg
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[Muffit]

Thanks BST! Thanks Dawg! And thank you so much for reading! :heart:

Affectionately,
Muffit
:muffit:

[Gemini1999]

I....uh.....must have missed something....

Where is this story at? I would like to make comment, but it would help if I could read it first.... :D

Bryan
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[Muffit]

I....uh.....must have missed something....

Where is this story at? I would like to make comment, but it would help if I could read it first.... :D

Bryan
Hi Gemini! It's right above this thread. Here's the link:

http://www.colonialfleets.com/forums/showthread.php?t=6778

It's an attachment inside that post...
Thanks!
Muffit

[shiningstar]

Please post your thoughts, regarding Abduction - A True Story, in this thread.

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Muffit you are soooooooooo talented! Keep writing Muffit! :D :thumbsup:

[Muffit]

Thank you so much Shiningstar :heart:

:muffit:

[jewels]

Muffit,
that was cool!

you are so visual, and multisensory! The cell bars....oh, my!
:D

[Rowan]

Oh Muffit that was really cool :thumbsup:
After reading these two sections I knew what "you" were and what you were describing.


"Through my periphery, I saw the bars on either side, and walls perhaps at head and feet. I was in a cell."
and
"It was then I noticed it; a bizarre device suspended above me. Forming a circle at its perimeter, hung pale colored objects, of shapes I could not begin to understand. "


After working in the maternity ward I spent many hours thinking about the birthing process and the world of a baby and how they might perceive their surroundings the way you describe it is very much what I imagined.

The way you have structured this story reminds me of a short story I read in college called "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson
http://www.classicshorts.com/stories/lotry.html

[Muffit]

Thanks Jewels!! Thanks Rowan!! And Rowan, I was hoping it would read like that.. kinda give ya clues and you might (or might not) guess the ending, kinda like a whodunnit.


Thank you all for reading!!! :heart:
:muffit: