Comment Thread for "The Return" by Gin Rummy

[Dawg]

The story is here: The Return (http://www.colonialfleets.com/forums/showthread.php?t=18098)

I called it "rip-roaring" and I meant it. The first three chapters only whet your appetite for what's coming, I'm sure.

I'm looking forward to reading what everyone else thinks as well, so sound off here!

So far, so good, Gin. Keep it coming!

I am
Dawg
:warrior:

[Gin Rummy]

Thanks for posting it and the encouragement Dawg! Glad you like it so far, really excited to get feedback from true Galactica fans. More to come soon!

[Apolloisall]

At a quick glance, it reads like a story as professionally (if not more so) written as any good published novel I've ever read. I will read it in its entirety at my first opportunity.:salute:

[Gin Rummy]

Thank you very much - looking forward to your full review.

[Senmut]

This could be perfect fodder for a TV film.
My only critique is that, after 10 yahrens and more, the new city should be further along. I mean there should be more buildings not made from cut-up ship's hulls. Brick kilns and steel mills.
Just a thought.